Dear Emil, hello! We are writing this letter to you in order to say you all, that we can't say, because you are so popular sportman! We hope that all your gold medals are not the end of your history in IBU. Well, we want to wish you more and more wins in the sport, hapiness in your own life! Haven't you ever think, that all your achivements are all that you could do? Of course, no! And we know it, like you. Every race we watch in our homes and every race we believe, that it is the best race in your career, but on next day you try do best and it fantastic, when a person is ambition. In this biathlon world is so important to have a real best friend and as we know you have. Is it Tarjei? We like read funny stories, which you invent. If people are young, why they should think and concentrate only on competition? It is necessary to relax. Actually, we want to congratulate you with brilliant and hard season and with vice championship in total.Unfortunately you lost five points, but we sure that you are happy for your friend T.Boe. In the end we want to say, that we are waiting for new awards. You are loved. Please, sometimes come to Russia.
Текст хороший. Есть несколько исправлений/предложений. Я не филолог, поэтому перепроверьте. Haven't you ever think - правильно thought, person is ambition - или has ambition или is ambitious, In this biathlon world is so... - it перед is, championship - лучше, например, champion's status. Бе красивее записать используя норвежские буквы, покажет уважение к его стране. Sometimes имеется ввиду иногда или хотели сказать когда-нибудь, тогда sometime.
in order to say everything we couldn't (если перевод "пишем с целью сказать все что не могли") happiness in ur personal life Haven't you ever think, that all your achievements are all that you could do? смысл не поняла но минимум have u ever thought And we know it, like you. тут тоже не понятно смысл.. each race we watch at home and durin' each race we do believe it is the best race at ur career. on the next day u try to do ur best it is fantastic when a person has ambitions ( или a person is ambitious) .. it is so important like to read to real funny stories u've been drawn into if people are young whether they should concentrate only on competitions? we are sure we are looking forward to new ... U're are loved -> We love u. первый вариант нельзя так сказать please come to russia from time to time вообще аккуратней, текст скорее переводит дословно написанное нежели смысл, порядок слов и слова некоторые не в том смысле употреблены. я не все поняла. он тем более не все поймет
Dear Emil, hello! We are writing this letter to you in order to say everything we couldn't, because you are so popular! We hope that all your gold medals are only the beginning of your career. Well, we want to wish you more and more victories in the sport, hapiness in your personal life! Haven't you ever thought, that all your achivements are all that you could do? Of course, no! And we know it as well as you. Each race we watch at home and durin' each race we do believe it is the best race in your career, on the next day you try to do your best and it fantastic, when a person is ambitious. In this biathlon world it is so important to have a real best friend and as we know you have one. Is it Tarjei? We like to read funny stories, which you invent. If people are young whether they should concentrate only on competitions? It is necessary to relax. Actually, we want to congratulate you with brilliant and hard season and with vice championship in total.Unfortunately you lost five points, but we are sure that you are happy for your friend Tarjei Boe. In the end we want to say, that we are looking forward to new awards. We love you. Please come to Russia from time to time.
you are so popular sportman - so popular или such a popular sportsman; We hope that all your gold medals are not the end of your history in IBU - а может позитивнее будет are only the beginning of your career; And we know it, like you - and we know it as well as you; in your career
In this biathlon world IT is - подлежащее обязательно, as we know you have ONE - тоже соглосование; championship скорее больше чемпионат чем чемпионство; we ARE sure; Тарьюшку уж полностью напишите
Давайте тут буквально за 2 дня напишем, чтобы потом меньше хлопотать.
hello! We are writing this letter to you in order to say you all, that we can't say, because you are so popular sportman! We hope that all your gold medals are not the end of your history in IBU.
Well, we want to wish you more and more wins in the sport, hapiness in your own life! Haven't you ever think, that all your achivements are all that you could do? Of course, no! And we know it, like you.
Every race we watch in our homes and every race we believe, that it is the best race in your career, but on next day you try do best and it fantastic, when a person is ambition.
In this biathlon world is so important to have a real best friend and as we know you have. Is it Tarjei? We like read funny stories, which you invent. If people are young, why they should think and concentrate only on competition? It is necessary to relax.
Actually, we want to congratulate you with brilliant and hard season and with vice championship in total.Unfortunately you lost five points, but we sure that you are happy for your friend T.Boe.
In the end we want to say, that we are waiting for new awards. You are loved. Please, sometimes come to Russia.
я вообще не представляю что еще можно накатать
Оо
Эмилю тож понравится, я уверена)
Лиз, "wins" в значении "победы"?
тогда лучше "Victories"
happiness in ur personal life
Haven't you ever think, that all your achievements are all that you could do? смысл не поняла но минимум have u ever thought
And we know it, like you. тут тоже не понятно смысл..
each race we watch at home and durin' each race we do believe it is the best race at ur career.
on the next day u try to do ur best
it is fantastic when a person has ambitions ( или a person is ambitious)
.. it is so important
like to read
to real funny stories u've been drawn into
if people are young whether they should concentrate only on competitions?
we are sure
we are looking forward to new ...
U're are loved -> We love u. первый вариант нельзя так сказать
please come to russia from time to time
вообще аккуратней, текст скорее переводит дословно написанное нежели смысл, порядок слов и слова некоторые не в том смысле употреблены. я не все поняла. он тем более не все поймет
hello! We are writing this letter to you in order to say everything we couldn't, because you are so popular! We hope that all your gold medals are only the beginning of your career.
Well, we want to wish you more and more victories in the sport, hapiness in your personal life! Haven't you ever thought, that all your achivements are all that you could do? Of course, no! And we know it as well as you.
Each race we watch at home and durin' each race we do believe it is the best race in your career, on the next day you try to do your best and it fantastic, when a person is ambitious.
In this biathlon world it is so important to have a real best friend and as we know you have one. Is it Tarjei? We like to read funny stories, which you invent. If people are young whether they should concentrate only on competitions? It is necessary to relax.
Actually, we want to congratulate you with brilliant and hard season and with vice championship in total.Unfortunately you lost five points, but we are sure that you are happy for your friend Tarjei Boe.
In the end we want to say, that we are looking forward to new awards. We love you. Please come to Russia from time to time.
ошибки исправим и все отлично будет)
Лизк, умница)
Ммм, думаю писать про 2ое место будем в крайнем случае.
просто поздравить с удачным сезоном))